You are making sound progress toward producing an edit. Make
sure that you take responsibility and make your input clear. At times you are not working to your full potential and the blog reflects this at present. Now is the time to make sure that research and planning is detailed and thorough.
You can add to blog posts to ensure that detail is there. Posts about representation and audiences is thin and you need to follow up what is covered in class with your own research and analysis.
Your film demonstrates a sound knowledge of the medium and technical skill. You should complete this by the deadline. I think you need to film some different shots to show an awareness of generic codes and conventions.
Add;
Production schedule
Analysis of audiences and representations needs to be thorough
Concentrate on updating the web-log by Christmas and complete an edit.
You can add to blog posts to ensure that detail is there. Posts about representation and audiences is thin and you need to follow up what is covered in class with your own research and analysis.
Your film demonstrates a sound knowledge of the medium and technical skill. You should complete this by the deadline. I think you need to film some different shots to show an awareness of generic codes and conventions.
Add;
Production schedule
Analysis of audiences and representations needs to be thorough
Concentrate on updating the web-log by Christmas and complete an edit.
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